Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Spanish term or phrase:
por el apoyo... en una gran labor comercial
English translation:
the support and hard work of the sales network
Added to glossary by
Edward Tully
Jan 13, 2015 20:57
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Spanish term
United Kingdom
por el apoyo... en una gran labor comercial
Spanish to English
Bus/Financial
Finance (general)
Investment Funds
Investment Fund Range (Spain)
I'm not entirely sure how these two parts of the sentence are linked. I'm assuming that "por el apoyo" means "due to the support", but does "en" mean "with" or "of" or something else here.
I think that "red" is referring to the bank's network (presumably of branches).
Any clarification would be much appreciated.
"La gama (name) es un éxito por el apoyo, desde su lanzamiento en (date), en una gran labor commercial de la red y en el compromise hacia los clients de una información de calidad, clara, sencilla y transparente."
I'm not entirely sure how these two parts of the sentence are linked. I'm assuming that "por el apoyo" means "due to the support", but does "en" mean "with" or "of" or something else here.
I think that "red" is referring to the bank's network (presumably of branches).
Any clarification would be much appreciated.
"La gama (name) es un éxito por el apoyo, desde su lanzamiento en (date), en una gran labor commercial de la red y en el compromise hacia los clients de una información de calidad, clara, sencilla y transparente."
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My take is that the business has been a success, but as part of the larger effort of the network. I think that the sentence needs to be reworded as below. I think that "comercial" is redundant here - it's quite clear what kind of work is involved.
Since its launch, the range has been a success due to the support and hard work of the network and its/the network's commitment to...
Since its launch, the range has been a success due to the support and hard work of the network and its/the network's commitment to...
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| Sounds as though you could be along the right lines here, Edward. |
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philgoddard
: I don't think you can ignore "comercial", though. It means "sales", so I'd say "the sales network".
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Ah, good point - many thanks Phil! ;-)
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