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English term or phrase:

rules for complex title/subtitle

English answer:

The White Rabbit Returns

Added to glossary by Anna Maria Augustine (X)
Oct 17, 2006 10:59
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English term

rules for complex title/subtitle

English Art/Literary Philosophy art discourse
In English, when you have a title composed of two alternative titles, conjoined by "or", what is the rule for capitalization and punctuation? For instance: "The White Rabbit Returns, Or: The Invention of Found Objects". Is this format correct?
Thanks

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Anna Maria Augustine (X) Oct 22, 2006:
Thank you!!
Nesrin Oct 22, 2006:
Not to interfere with your choice (and good for Anna Maria), but was this really the answer to your question about titles conjoined by "or"?

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The White Rabbit Returns

Capitals/uppercase at the beginning of each word, and no punctuation (full stop)
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"The White Rabbit Returns, or The Invention of Found Objects".

A famous example is the Shakespeare play:

"Twelfth Night, or What You Will"
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Peer comment(s):

neutral Nesrin : This is one possibility, but as you see on this amazon.com page, the title "Twelfth night, or what you will" is written in a variety of ways, depending on the publisher http://tinyurl.com/y422z5
8 mins
agree Jeanette Phillips : In English: traditinally, capitalisation for all words in the title except or, of, and, the
9 mins
agree Lubosh Hanuska : correct as well, but Nesrin was more comprehensive and answered it all (incl the lowercase "or" in the note)...
16 mins
agree Ken Cox : Could be correct if this is the wording and punctuation of the actual title (see my comment to Nesrin's answer).
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Different rules

I've seen different rules followed on the internet. You'll find that the first title is often followed by a colon. I don' t think this has anything to do with the fact that the 2nd title starts with an "or", but because it's a rule according to certain bibliography citation styles that the first and the second titles should be separated by a colon. But if you look at the book cover itself, you probably won't find this colon. Please see below how the same title is cited on different sites:

Jacob Abbot, The Harper Establishment, or, How the Story Books are Made, Harper & Brothers, New York, NY, 1855.
www.officemuseum.com/photo_gallery_1860s-1880s.htm

Title:, The Harper Establishment: or, How the Story Books Are Made ...
onlinebooks.library.upenn.edu/webbin/book/lookupid?key=olbp10116

Title: The Harper Establishment, or How the Story Books Are Made Author(s): Ian Rogerson Journal: Library Review Year: Oct 2002 Vol : 51 Issue: 7 ...
www.emeraldinsight.com/Insight/viewContentItem.do?contentTy...

The Harper Establishment; or, How the Story Books are Made by Jacob Abbot (1855)
www.uiowa.edu/~obermann/endofbooks/links.html

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Note added at 21 mins (2006-10-17 11:21:06 GMT)
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I've only found one site on which the "or" is capitalised, so I'd say don't capitalise it.

The Harper Establishment: Or, How The Story Books Are Made by Jacob Abbott ...
2020ok.com/tags/harper.htm

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Note added at 5 days (2006-10-22 19:13:55 GMT) Post-grading
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Hi adi! Yes, indeed, you can't points to more than one answerer or change your grading unless you ask a moderator to do so. But never about the points! I'm glad I was able to help!

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Note added at 5 days (2006-10-22 19:18:55 GMT) Post-grading
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sorry: you can't *give* points...
Note from asker:
dear nesrin, yours was definitely the most helpful answer, and as far as i understood - that was the response i had sent, after writing to anna maria that while not quite the answer to my question, it was nontheless helpful. i'm not quite sure i understand how the feedback works here. it now appears that if i give points to one i cannot give points to another answerer. is that indeed the case?
Peer comment(s):

agree Lubosh Hanuska
19 mins
agree Dave Calderhead
48 mins
agree William [Bill] Gray
49 mins
agree Ken Cox : The colon is the standard prescribed by the Oxford Guide to Style, which also says 'A title's punctuation must follow that on the title page. However, since there is usually a line break rather than any punctuation..., OUP standardizes on a colon.'
1 hr
agree Alfa Trans (X)
7 hrs
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