Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

spool of her design

English answer:

line of her planned action

Added to glossary by Peter Simon
Apr 21, 2015 07:49
9 yrs ago
English term

spool of her design

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
When Al kicked her in the stomach, shouting Leave!,Sera did just that.For the first time she really did leave,not just the room,but the apartment, and ultimately the city. Waiting by the elevator,there was time to go back, and there was the distant whir of the elevator's ascent.There were these two intangible things with her in the hall,both playing out their purposes. Joining them,she held her ground;indoor-outdoor carpeting, and hard won, it was to be.
Waiting was something she was doing,but she felt wonderful to have done this one thing.
Unraveling then, she saw the spool of her design,freely giving her slack as the elevator door opened and she stepped in,still not having heard Al's approach. The steel doors pressed themselves together to the faint sound of glass breaking.All the way down a voice in her head, or what she took to be the meaning of that expression, told her to continue doing things..
Change log

May 5, 2015 06:32: Peter Simon Created KOG entry

Discussion

Carol Gullidge Apr 21, 2015:
What happened next? What was the sound of breaking glass, and did Al catch up with her?

I can't wait for the next instalment :))

Responses

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line of her planned action

the spool being the spool of the thread/line as parts of her plan follow each other in a logical line, steps following each other etc.
Peer comment(s):

agree Yvonne Gallagher : yes, and it's "unraveling" and "giving her slack"=setting her free
10 mins
Thanks, Gallagy, and you're right, definitely.
agree Carol Gullidge : I hope she got away :)
3 hrs
Thanks, Carol, I'm beginning to be interested too :)
agree Tina Vonhof (X) : Makes you want to read the book.
17 hrs
Thank you, Tina, agreed.
agree Phong Le
5 days
Thank you!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
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