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Source text in English

Sunday Mornin' Comin' Down

Well, I woke up Sunday morning
With no way to hold my head that didn't hurt.
And the beer I had for breakfast wasn't bad,
So I had one more for dessert.
Then I fumbled in my closet through my clothes
And found my cleanest dirty shirt.
Then I washed my face and combed my hair
And stumbled down the stairs to meet the day.

I'd smoked my mind the night before
With cigarettes and songs I'd been picking.
But I lit my first and watched a small kid
Playing with a can that he was kicking.
Then I walked across the street
And caught the Sunday smell of someone's frying chicken.
And Lord, it took me back to something that I'd lost
Somewhere, somehow along the way.

On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
And Sunday morning coming down.

In the park I saw a daddy
With a laughing little girl that he was swinging.
And I stopped beside a Sunday school
And listened to the songs they were singing.
Then I headed down the street,
And somewhere far away a lonely bell was ringing,
And it echoed through the canyon
Like the disappearing dreams of yesterday.

On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
And Sunday morning coming down.

There were 6 entries submitted in this pair during the submission phase.

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Submitted segment translations

Translations submitted for each source text segment are listed below. Segments have had surrounding punctuation stripped, and the resulting identical segments have been grouped together, so each listed translation should differ, but the difference may be subtle (eg. internal punctuation or diacritics).

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Source text segment #8

In the park I saw a daddy
With a laughing little girl that he was swinging.
And I stopped beside a Sunday school
And listened to the songs they were singing.
Rank by:
U naručju kako je njiše,
oca s nasmijanom kćerkicom u parku vidjeh,
te pred svetom nedeljnom školom stadoh
da slušam pjesme što ih pjevaše.
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En el parque ví un papito hamacando la hijita en una hamaca. Y me detuve cerquita de una escuela dominical Y escuché las canciones que ellos estuvieron cantando.

Translations of this segment (6 total; 6 unique)

Di taman kulihat ayah Dan anak perempuan tawa diayun Dan di samping sekolah Minggu Lalu kudengar lagu mereka
Di tepi bantaran sungai Si pemulung menjelang pengamen kecil. Dia pun diam mendengarkan Kidung tentang ayam goreng dan mobil
Di taman kulihat seorang ayah sedang mengayun gadis kecil yang sedang tertawa. Dan kuberhenti di samping sekolah Minggu Dan mendengarkan lagu yang mereka nyanyikan
Di taman seorang ayah kuawasi Dia mengayun gadis cerianya sepenuh hati Lalu ku berhenti di sekolah Minggu pagi Terdengar lantunan budak bernyanyi
Di taman aku melihat seorang ayah Dengan gadis kecil yang tertawa karena ia terlihat mengagumkan. Dan aku berhenti di samping sebuah sekolah Minggu Dan mendengarkan lagu-lagu yang mereka nyanyikan
Di taman kusaksikan seorang ayah Tengah membuai gadis kecilnya yang tertawa bahagia. Kuterhenti di samping sebuah sekolah minggu, Kuterbuai akan lantunan lagu yang mereka senandungkan
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