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17th Translation Contest: "The Sounds of Silence" » English to Korean

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Source text in English

A theme of the age, at least in the developed world, is that people crave silence and can find none. The roar of traffic, the ceaseless beep of phones, digital announcements in buses and trains, TV sets blaring even in empty offices, are an endless battery and distraction. The human race is exhausting itself with noise and longs for its oppositeโ€”whether in the wilds, on the wide ocean or in some retreat dedicated to stillness and concentration. Alain Corbin, a history professor, writes from his refuge in the Sorbonne, and Erling Kagge, a Norwegian explorer, from his memories of the wastes of Antarctica, where both have tried to escape.

And yet, as Mr Corbin points out in "A History of Silence", there is probably no more noise than there used to be. Before pneumatic tyres, city streets were full of the deafening clang of metal-rimmed wheels and horseshoes on stone. Before voluntary isolation on mobile phones, buses and trains rang with conversation. Newspaper-sellers did not leave their wares in a mute pile, but advertised them at top volume, as did vendors of cherries, violets and fresh mackerel. The theatre and the opera were a chaos of huzzahs and barracking. Even in the countryside, peasants sang as they drudged. They donโ€™t sing now.

What has changed is not so much the level of noise, which previous centuries also complained about, but the level of distraction, which occupies the space that silence might invade. There looms another paradox, because when it does invadeโ€”in the depths of a pine forest, in the naked desert, in a suddenly vacated roomโ€”it often proves unnerving rather than welcome. Dread creeps in; the ear instinctively fastens on anything, whether fire-hiss or bird call or susurrus of leaves, that will save it from this unknown emptiness. People want silence, but not that much.

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There were 11 entries submitted in this pair during the submission phase, 3 of which were selected by peers to advance to the finals round. The winning entry was determined based on finals round voting by peers.

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Entries (11 total; 3 finalists) Expand all entries

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Entry #23794 — Discuss 0 — Variant: South Korea
Woojoo Seo
Woojoo Seo
Koreja, Juลพna
Winner
Voting points1st2nd3rd
6712 x47 x25 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.213.27 (15 ratings)3.14 (14 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
๋ณ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์†Œ์Œ์˜ ์–‘์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์นจ๋ฌต์ด ์Šค๋ฉฐ๋“ค์–ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ž๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ๊ฟฐ์ฐจ๊ณ  ๋“ค์–ด์˜จ ์‚ฐ๋งŒํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์˜ ์–‘์ด๋‹ค. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ๋˜ ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์—ญ์„ค์ด ํฌ๋ฏธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚œ๋‹ค.
Flows well
natural
Hee jung Cho
Entry #23363 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
332 x47 x211 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.083.00 (13 ratings)3.15 (13 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #24280 — Discuss 0 — Variant: South Korea
Lee Junho
Lee Junho
Koreja, Juลพna
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
5810 x47 x24 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry3.503.39 (18 ratings)3.61 (18 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 3 users entered 6 "like" tags
  • 2 users agreed with "likes" (6 total agrees)
  • 1 user disagreed with "likes" (3 total disagrees)
์™์ž์ง€๊ป„ํ–ˆ๋‹ค
Good term selection
good expre​ssion
Hee jung Cho
๋ชฉ์ฒญ๊ป ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์ณค๊ณ 
Good term selection
natural
Hee jung Cho
-1
+2
2
๋ฌด๊ฑฐ์šด ๋ชธ์„ ๋‹ฌ๋žฌ๋‹ค
Good term selection
good expre​ssion
Hee jung Cho
-1
+1
1
๋ณ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์†Œ์Œ์˜ ์ˆ˜์ค€์ด๋ผ๊ธฐ๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” ์ฃผ๋ณ€์˜ ์‚ฐ๋งŒํ•จ์˜ ์ˆ˜์ค€์ด๋‹ค.
Flows well
rhyme
Hee jung Cho
-1
+1
1
๋‘๋ ค์›€์ด ์Šฌ๊ธˆ์Šฌ๊ธˆ ๊ธฐ์–ด์˜ค๋ฅด๊ณ , ๊ท€๋Š” ๋ณธ๋Šฅ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์•„๋ฌด ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋ผ๋„ ์ฐพ์•„๋‚ด ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•œ๋‹ค
Good term selection
arise7
+2
์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ๊ณ ์š”๋ฅผ ์›ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ ๋งŽ์ด ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
Other
This entry​ seems to ​be the mos​t adequate​ and decen​t translat​ion so far​.
Weonill Kim (X)


Non-finalist entries

The following entries were not selected by peers to advance to finals-round voting.

Entry #23504 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.972.80 (15 ratings)3.13 (15 ratings)
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  • 1 user entered 2 "like" tags
  • 1 user disagreed with "likes" (1 total disagree)
-1
1
์—ญ์‚ฌํ•™ ๊ต์ˆ˜์ธ ์•Œ๋žญ ์ฝ”๋ฅด๋ฒต์€ ์†Œ๋ฅด๋ณธ ๋Œ€ํ•™๊ต์— ์žˆ๋Š” ์€์‹ ์ฒ˜์—์„œ ์ง‘ํ•„ ํ™œ๋™์„ ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ฅด์›จ์ด์˜ ํƒํ—˜๊ฐ€์ธ ์–ผ๋ง ์นด๊ฒŒ๋Š” ๋‚จ๊ทน์˜ ๋ถˆ๋ชจ์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์–ต์„ ๋˜์‚ด๋ฆฐ๋‹ค.
Good term selection
์—ญ์‹œ ์ž˜ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•œ ๋ถ€​๋ถ„์œผ๋กœ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋•๋‹ˆ๋‹ค​.
dmkchang
๋ถˆํ‰ํ–ˆ์—ˆ์œผ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ.
Flows well
๊ธฐ๊ณ„์ ์ธ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํ”ผ​ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ฒ˜​๋ฆฌํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์œผ๋กœ ๋ˆˆ์—​ ๋•๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
dmkchang
Entry #24073 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.833.07 (14 ratings)2.58 (12 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #23461 — Discuss 0 — Variant: South Korea
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.772.62 (13 ratings)2.92 (13 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
์ •์ ์„ ๊ฐˆ๋งํ•˜๋‚˜ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค
Flows well
YHH
Entry #22588 — Discuss 0 — Variant: South Korea
Coffeedrinker
Coffeedrinker
Sjedinjene Ameriฤke Drลพave
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry2.672.80 (15 ratings)2.53 (15 ratings)
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Entry #22324 — Discuss 0 — Variant: South Korea
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Entry2.482.62 (13 ratings)2.33 (12 ratings)
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Entry #22658 — Discuss 0 — Variant: South Korea
Hye Han (X)
Hye Han (X)
Koreja, Juลพna
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry1.842.00 (7 ratings)1.67 (6 ratings)
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Entry #22612 — Discuss 0 — Variant: South Korea
Paul and Paulin
Paul and Paulin
Koreja, Juลพna
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry1.581.33 (6 ratings)1.83 (6 ratings)
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Entry #23323 — Discuss 0 — Variant: South Korea
Dj Lee
Dj Lee
Koreja, Juลพna
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Entry1.281.22 (9 ratings)1.33 (9 ratings)
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